If you attend networking events, even if just occasionally, I am willing to bet $20 that you have met a handful of people who cannot tell you what they do. And I don’t mean “I’m a CIA Officer, so I’d have to kill you if I told you about my job” people (we have a lot of those here in the DC area), but people who ramble on and on and seem completely incapable of quickly explaining to you what they do.
It drives me nuts.
In our sound-bite and social media-obsessed society, how can you not have a quick answer ready? Twitter demands it. Facebook is more generous, but when I’m skimming my news updates and you post something rambling, I am not going to hit “continue” to see what else you have to say in your status update. Get to the point already, because I don’t have time.
Your elevator speech should be tweetable. Yes, I am saying it should be 140 characters or less. You can tweet it to new followers or use it in your Facebook, LinkedIn, and Twitter profiles, but even better, you can whip it out at networking events. Trust me, the shorter and more concise your elevator pitch, the smarter you sound.
So, to craft a super-succinct elevator speech, you need to write down the answers to these 3 questions:
- What is my product or service?
- Who are my clients?
- How do I help my clients?
Your answers should be short, and by short, I mean a phrase, not a long, complicated sentence. Here is how I answer those questions:
- Marketing writing and editing
- Small to mid-size companies
- Generate leads and become thought leaders
If they’re not short phrases, strip your answers down to the basics.
Now, link the phrases together in a way that makes most sense, like this:
I write and edit marketing copy for small to mid-size companies that generate leads and position them as thought leaders.
That sentence is 123 characters, with spaces, which means I can expand on it a bit and add more specifics. Instead of adding my bread and butter specialties of blogs, newsletters, and website content, I decided to tighten it up, like this:
I produce the content that small to mid-size companies need to generate leads and position them as thought leaders.
That was only 117 characters, with spaces, and I think it’s better than the first. What do you think?
OK, your turn! I would love to hear what you come up, so go ahead and add your before and after elevator speech in the comment section.
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